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"You know I'm such a a fool for you."

You watch me stare at you from the corner of my eye.
You see me fall apart slowly but so painfully.
You stand there while my heart gives away and i start to fall.
You have watched me cry alone wanting to forget you but hurting so bad.
You've laughed at me for being so weak i couldnt move myself out of bed.
You could care less if i'd die.
Nothing about me matters to you.
Nothing you've done bothers you.
You get pleasure from my pain.
You could stare into my eyes and not care when you see the thousands of tears caused by you.
It doesnt phase you to see me fall apart.
I know you dont care.
Why do i even keep trying?
After all of this, you know im such a fool for you.

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  • Morgaine
    June 18, 2007
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    I can tell this poem is from the heart! Well written! Thank you for entering and good luck!