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Awake In The Whisper

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To touch those lotus blossems
hampered by the wind
and your eyes beautiful in those cresent shapes,
Somehow I feel your exotic passion
reaching past the new moon,
Random in those notes of time
wherein the silence
echoes in the shadow,
See the ripples in the water ?
Feel the rhythm in your soul ?
Hear the drums in the distance ?
Awake in the whisper of your heartbeat
shattered in the spiral dance,
Rituals made magic
in the wings of silver,
Secrets sustained in my heart,
And in the bright sun
a horizon meets to touch another morning,

March 1, 2001

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Written January 10th, 2002

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  • Trilliana
    April 24, 2004
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    wow... this is beautiful and so loving... this is amazing hun


  • Celtic Nomad silver member
    February 21, 2004
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    I can smell the blossom, this is rich and fragrant and heavy with longing and tinged with sorrow, a full write, gorgeous!

    Sheona


  • AlaskanChica88
    March 29, 2003
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    Wow... this was beautiful! Wow.. great write! Thanks for sharing!
    ~K~


  • sidewinder silver member
    January 11, 2002
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    Thank you sweetsadness !
    I'm glad you enjoyed the piece !

  • SweetSadness86
    January 10, 2002
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    you are an awesome poet. i could almost see through your eyes, your feelings behind the words.


  • sidewinder silver member
    January 10, 2002
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    Thank you again Blupoetress !
    I'm glad you enjoyed the read !


  • April Renee
    January 10, 2002
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    wow
    very beautiful
    great job

    ~*~adriana~*~

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