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my little one

Hush my little boy,
Don't you shed another tear,
Momma is right here
Please don't ever fear.
I will love you forever
And to the end of time.
Don't ever forget you are always going to be mine.
Life holds many things
And I promise I will always try to be there for you
As much as I can give.
Don't ever give up on your dreams,
In life you can do anything. My dearest son,
Know that you are the only one in my eyes,
Forever I will care. Hush my little boy
Let me rock you to sleep,
My tiny little thing,
Know that no matter how
Tall you become, you are always
Gonna be my little one.

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  • RockChick
    August 18, 2007

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    Happy write for your son, if this is a true story. I really liked this piece and wish you and your son a happy life.

    I especially liked:

    Hush my little boy,
    Don't you shed another tear,
    Momma is right here
    Please don't ever fear.

    Just make your son read that and see what he thinks...he should love it...since it's written by his mom and it's written so well.


  • xXMascarra-TearsxX
    August 17, 2007
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    I loved this it was so cute great write


  • Perception
    August 12, 2007
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    Very cute.


  • JoyfulWriter
    August 11, 2007

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    So much beauty here surrounded with a mom'c precious love....I just adored this...reading you has made such an impact on my heart....smiles, Terry


  • Talking Toni gold member
    August 5, 2007

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    So Heartfelt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    This was such a sweet and heatfelt piece you have penned!!!! A mother's love can never be fully conveyed through words but you have done a wonderful jon expressing your unending love and pride in your son here. I have a daughter and feel the same way for her. I wrote her a poem as well called "The Love of my life My Hannah rae" read if you like. This was full of love and committment to always be there for your son and he will treasure this piece when he grows older I am sure!!!Thanks fro sharing!!!~~Toni~~


  • Hebz
    June 16, 2007

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    so emotional, great piece...

    Thanks for entering my contest..& Best of Luck

    GloriousGift
    Heba

  • Just4u
    June 14, 2007
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    joined by blood
    growth through trails
    family love

    -Eddy

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