Something special needed for this night.
Blue and white lace, so sheer and light.
A teddy made for an alluring dance.
Silky veils of an Arabian romance.
Swirling, twisting, swinging my hips.
A seductive smile upon my lips.
Removing veils, a little more skin.
Moving closer, away with a spin.
Tempo speeds up to a faster beat.
Eyes light up with passionate heat.
He pulls a veil from where it rests.
The bells chime on my bare breast.
The song is coming to a stop.
I dance over and climb on top.
Sheathing his rod to my core.
Another dance we gladly explore.
Rocking, we build a delicious fire.
Pleasing each others longings, desire.
Oh, my prince, we are far from done.
Our Arabian night has just begun.
A contest entry
- Doing It In A Ted E (teddy) by Ted E Bare.
525 points, ended July 9, 2007, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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NICE
very exotic. When I was in Egypt I remember that dance. Minus the sexual fantasy. Very well done. Took this one to another level. Thanks
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Bring on the Arabian nights
let the rain dance on our bodies
We will be doing it right
as we get down and very naughty
~~~Nicely done indeedy~~~
Ted E
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PERFECT! What else can I say...
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Delicious!
Mmmmm! What a wonderful treat in reading this! From one dance to another dance. And I'm sure many more dances to come. Now I need to go grab me a dance partner myself!
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"Oh, my prince, we are far from done.
Our Arabian night has just begun."
But, haven't u left your readers craving for more haa haa.. just kidding..
ur poem is full of passion, seduction, romance, ... music... a beautiful arabian night !!!
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hot pic too
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beautiful language here
it's nicely written
well illustrated
really drew me in
you have a great sense of imagery
and it really allows the reader
to focus on the subject
and really connect
with the reader awesome piece,
keep writing
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Wow! Heated Desire
You have just wrote a perfect sweet erotic piece, It just gives us such a beautiful picture of a a belly dancer that just lost her cute little teddy. Nice concept and exciting seduction. excellent write...novy
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Thanks
Thank you, I hope that everyone thinks the same as you.
raingoddes
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