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Snatched

She's gentle as a cloud
but stronger than wind
simple, yet nothing seen
beautifully pale skin

She glows with a shimmer
of her wonderful heart
Eyes tell of magic
no finish but a tragic start

Fragrance of the morning moon
quick to steal a breath
the glance of her eyes
quick to cause a death

Live for the moment spent
lying within her grasp
Love her for the moment
she lets your world crash

Theres no way that the film
of any quick shutter
could capture her beauty
that makes young boys shudder

She is something amazing
something you'll crave
day and night, breath to breath
until you reach your grave

This girl is wonderful
Creative and Witty
She cuter than heck
and prettier than pretty
Her grip upon you is
one of unbreakable force
But never will I want
her to leave my life course
I love this Girl
Nothing can Match
the Clutch that she has
my heart she has snatched


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  • Samantha Amergirdol
    July 10, 2007

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    this is a sweet poem... i love your word choice, it makes this girl seem almost otherworldly, like a goddess or something. i can definitely tell what she means to you


  • Beating gold member
    June 16, 2007

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    wow. what a wonderful girl you are descriping. she sounds great and i love the lines:
    "Nothing can Match
    the Clutch that she has
    my heart she has snatched"


  • PatheticKt
    June 15, 2007
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    wow, this poem is so fascinating, wee! great job that you've done here, woot! ^_^


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    June 14, 2007

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    you know i think this is something good, you painted a picture of a woman, and i love that about this poem, keep it flowing, you did agreat job