The one thing from my past
Has come back to haunt me.
What I never wanted to do
Has now been done.
And the reminder of such foolishness
Marks the wrists
Of the wretched person,
Who had done such a thing.
The urge came so suddenly,
And my consciousness slipped away..
Kept me blinded by my actions,
And has left me with scars.
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Still working on it...
I know it's very choppy...but please, comments would be appreciated.
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Thw wording is really strong and captivating.
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Ty,
I love you. <3
Awesome right bby.
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Ooooh, honestly, I really like this one. I'm not sure if it should be "whom" or "who" (I would probably have to look it up, and who has the energy to do that right now?), but I lurve your way of phrasing things and looking at the world. Plus, I can relate.
love ya
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It's expressive
It's a sad peice. Just feel better TY <3xoxox -
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Thanks, it's not quite finish and I dont know if I'll change it...but yeah. It's the best I can do.
[xoRawRxo]
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