I love your crooked smile,
How awkward?
It compells me
Your crooked teeth,
so clean, smooth, and white
I love your crooked smile,
How kissable?
It drives me
Your crooked lips,
so luscious, soft, and red
I love your crooked smile,
How confused?
It overbears me
Your crooked words,
so untruthful, lovely, and gentle
I love your crooked smile,
How stunning?
It imprisons me
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
Author notes
I know it's a bit repetitive, but it was meant to be this way, I hope you like it.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Hey There
This was so cute and very well penned. I know you stated in your Intro...that you wanted to improve but it appears to me that you are already going down the path to Perfection.
Gr8 Job!
Ephiphany
Young & Very Talented.
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wow this is so good! yeah it is repetitive but I really liked that about it! excellent work!
-Steve-
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