Clinched Jaws of Guilt
Forever Set Within Stone
This Mouth’s Jaw Won’t Unhinge
Harboring Secrets of It’s Own
Blistering Welts of Decay
Encasing Swollen Fleshy Hands
Slithering and Prying to Separate
Gripping the Teeth to Rip It’s Demands
Stubby Gnawed Thumbs
Piercing the Eardrum for Blood
Lodging Themselves Within
Rewarded With a Crimson Flood
Bottom Jaw Ripped and Broke
Those Decayed Digits Gutting It
Secluded Brain Tormented Until Mad
Releasing Secrets like Word Vomit
Author notes
Option 1
A contest entry
- Are you truly dark by Dark Whispers.
300 points, ended June 18, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything. by Sonofdead.
800 points, ended June 26, 2007, 138 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sick and Twisted 7 by Acidanthra.
700 points, ended September 12, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Weird, Insane, Different--Freak me out of my skin by Demmy-Defect.
450 points, ended December 15, 2007, 4 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Judging...
beautfully gruesome. PERFECT FOR THIS TYPE OF CONTEST!! It isn't a different style, but thankfully that wasn't a MUST, so your fine. IT'S SO GREAT! I love your use of words and the way you rhym. It all adds up to a completly great pice of poetry. a fabulous write!
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Awesome picture, and you definitely gave some gory images, but tell us why this figure is going totally psycho.... let there be a story instead of just images... know what I mean?
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Guilt, that is why....the tittle goes with it, and the picture link below shows it as well, Harbering secrets...guilt, that is why. Thanks for reading!
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To aid those who can't quite picture what is going on in this poem...it was pic inspired here's the link
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This is a very interesting poem, Sam! I saw what happened and it brought of rather interesting pictures in my mind. You did a great job with this one. Stanza 3 flows really well with the two rhyming lines. Can't wait to read more! I always enjoy reading your poems!
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Thank you and your poems are lovely to read as well, I love how you're able to vent your emotions so forward...mine are buired in my work but yours....you can pull it off. Thanks for the comment.
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I love this, lol even though I read it earlier today. It's awesome, you did a rockin job!
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Yay thank you! how's yours comming along?
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Woah, the words in this piece and vocab are incredible and so very deep..wow..I'm really impressed here.
I wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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Thank You!
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