I was alone in the world
I thought nobody cared
There was no one to look to for a smile
That's when I found you
Sunlight shining through
The happiness, it lasted for a while
The night you said you loved me
I almost jumped for joy
I slept that night with a smile on my face
My wish upon a star
Convinced it had come true
Thought you could brighten any night-filled place
But lately now it seems
That you don't really care for me
The way you said you did that night
It's breaking up my dreams
It's tearing at my soul
Try to live my life like always, but I'm losing the fight
Sunshine disappearing
Always getting colder
I feel hate, distress and fear
Soon he will start looking
Calling, reaching for me
But he won't find me, I'm no longer here
It will be too late...
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I wrote this over a year ago before my boyfriend became my boyfriend.
Please tell me what you think
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The disappearance of sunshine is never permanant, and it is never too late for anything. Nicely written, sad and reflective. Nicely done, and all the best
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Wow..this is really sad. I could feel your pain throughout the whole poem. I especially liked the imagery you used here:"Sunshine disappearing Always getting colder" Really good write.
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Its very deep.. i can relate to that...sort of...
it has lot of emotions..sadness :[[[[[[[ -
this is a very deep piece..a lot of emotion can be shown through the poem...there are many people that can relate to this piece..the heart feeling like it's about to break....the mind losing it's trace of thought...the nights becoming the enemy...the days seem too long...almost every person will experience something like this in their lives and then they learn that gradually, life goes on...don't ever let anyone or anything bring you down....even though it may be hard, stay stong girl
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so much for staying on the lighter side of things huh?
i like it, its has a certain kinda of depreeses yet i love you feel, idk lol
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