Upset,
Breathing heavy,
I don't know where to go.
I'm now sulking in bad weather,
You had screamed at me, but gladly I'm out,
You're watching me, between the drops of rain, that's why
I love walking in the rain, then you don't know I'm crying.
Author notes
I used #12
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2-4-6-8-10-12-14 syllables
I love the quote "Dogs have Owners, Cats have Staff"
I love cats!! ^_^
A contest entry
- Phrase/Quote Contest by burdened.
600 points, ended July 22, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ Sometimes Life is not all roses! by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended July 1, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ouch, you can feel this piece. Great job!
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I praise you for your originality. This is both a visual and a technical feat which you have mastered so well. Inspiration for me to have a go at this contest which I had bookmarked. Hopefully we will meet again in the finalist list.
and all the very best in the contest. 
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I like this, it is an interesting form for me to see, and I like the concept of walking out on someone. And I found the dog/cat quote, and thought it was great, glad you like it. Thanks for your entry and good luck. Xx
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