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Shall It Be

True love at first sight
Or true liking at first talk
Is it love or is it friendship
Shall it be or shall it not be
What ever it is i don't know yet
But i shall know when  it comes to me
When the sun arises it is like i know it might be
Because the sun is like his gleaming eyes just staring at me
The things i already know aren't enough for me
So stop asking me questions that i don't know
I might never know
And i might even know tomorrow
My story does not end here
Because tomorrow is a new day to love
So i ask my self every day shall it be or shall it not
I myself know that i will always have a place for him in my heart
So ask yourself who might this someone be?



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  • LadyDementia gold member
    September 9, 2007
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    great poem, Good luck


  • xCandieKissesx
    September 8, 2007

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    This is a great write about being caught between love and freindship. I thought it was really neat how you put it together. Great job! Good luck in the contest!!
    Jackie ♥


  • plzdiefasterlove
    June 15, 2007

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    This poem really caught my eye. It flowed so nicly and the confusion in this piece and the longing to want to figure the answer out made this poem so meaningful. I really loved. Good Job. Keep penning.

    Plzdiefasterlove