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Relentless Nightmare

I've cried myself to sleep,
I've tried to dream of the better things...
But it all comes back..
In the end..
You look back at the madness
And you gives thanks that it is finally over.

For now..
There is a sweet taste in the air.
A sweet remedy of sickness
Seeping through my mind..
Wishing for more peace.
Everlasting hope..
Never fading..

Coming back just as nightmares.. and love reborn once again
Sealing doors and venturing through,

Forget the worsened memories and thoughts
Bring forth sweet memories.

Cherish Them Forever..

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  • violetlily12
    February 25, 2008
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    Uber good.

    James that was really good! ~Kayla


  • jcat gold member
    January 3, 2008

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    So much depth of emotions here, words of wisdom so eloquently spoken!! Yes indeed we should always forget the bad and cherish the good... You speak volumes of wisdom!


  • Pandorea
    December 11, 2007

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    wow...sad but beautiful at the same time.

    this is just me being picky, but sometimes you have .. and sometimes ... - it sort of ruins the flow a bit.

    hoever, this is gorgeous.


  • whiterabbit.
    June 14, 2007

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    I love this. It's beautiful and sad. I love the descriptions and the words that you used. The flow of this poem is beautiful as well. This is wonderful. ♥


  • woodstock 69
    June 13, 2007

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    Lately you've been going on about memories...
    Eh, I like this one too...
    And memories should be cherished forever, no matter how bad or how good...a memory is the only evidence that anything has ever happened...nice write.

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