Lost in the void of eternity
The scars of the past
Haunting the only hope I know
Forcing feelings into a locked chest
Burying it in a mountain of loneliness
Hiding the outcome of my pain
The cold steel glides across my wrist
Bringing to life horrors unimaginable
Turning myself inside out
The undead monsters inside my head
Unravel my burning desires
My darkest secrets revealed
I repeat my sacred dance of death
The echoes of fear yelling in my head
Fading away, leaving me alone in my agony
Author notes
option 1
A contest entry
- show me the pain,ill give you the money by Acrasia.
550 points, ended June 18, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hood ~ Winks~
I know this feeling all to well~ you penned it very well! -
nice write!good luck
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Amazing Piece!!!
"Forcing feelings into a locked chest/Burying it in a mountain of loneliness" my favorite line! because it is real. if you know what i mean... i hope you do. another amazing piece by you.
Another favorite set of lines "The echoes of fear yelling in my head/Fading away, leaving me alone in my agony" I really like this piece. Good Job!
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