Kiss...away...this...pain,
Help...me...live...again.
Yes I may seem needy
I may seem unfit
I may seem to be a broken doll
Shattered peices of my own emotions
Slivers that have crashed to the floor
I may seem to have brittle and aging thoughts
But my love streams eternal
I can seem to have multiple personalities
I can seem to be unstable
I'm only insane half the time
Yes...I realize that I may offend you at times
With my silence or dismissive responses
To things that are more or less important
Sexually, romantically, emotionally
When you speak words of kindness, care and love
My apologies for the shrug and laugh
I just do not deem myself fit
For such wonderful tastes
Yes your sweet intoxicating splendor
Intimidates my simple yet complex mind
For brilliance of the mind
Is hard to come by
In even the best of people
Remain mine...in these hours of darkness...be my flicker of candle light...Burning through out the night...Surround my unjust actions with security of warmth...Come close, feel my touch radiate...Remain mine...Remain mine....
Be my Prince of evil?
Persuade my unwilling heart
To show its true colors
Deep crimson
Shades of black
The results from years of rejection and secrecy
Yes, my heart holds a mask too
Allow me to surrender....Without impatience or expectation....Allow me to surrender...In excitement and relief....Complete my deepest desires....Let me feel whole....Bring me your infatuation....And you shall hold my soul...Release my inner demons...Let them go at last...Allow me to surrender...And forgive me for my past...
I hope you gaze upon me with wonder
As I do with you
I have not told you much
For I care to much of your thoughts
I hope you think of me for ever more
Yes and I pray your able to pry open the door
For it is behind my inner barriers
That I hide my ocean of beauty
Kiss....away...this...pain,
Help...me...love...again.
Author notes
Hmmm...Oppinions?
#5 and a bit of #6 I think.
A contest entry
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Comments
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I wish so much that I had enough words to tell you how moving this piece is and how amazing it is. And I am at a loss for the right words, so besides to say I'm speechless, I can't say much else.
So thank you so much for sharing this with me, and for entering the contest.
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This is beyond words, how amazing you truly are hunny This is everything, this is perfect
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very good. thank you for entering.
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that was very good, but what is the option #?
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i put it in my authors box....#5 and abit of #6.
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this is really good... (In your author notes, you spelled opinions wrong... lol. but that's ok... lol) this is really good.. I love the way you did the first 2 lines... those really got me... it kept my attention... good job! keep it up! good luck!
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lol ahh thank you for the correction. i shalld fix it shortly. thank you and i appreciate the comment im glad u enjoyed it.
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Lovely
wow
that was
so..
soo good
Oh man
I haven't read a really really good poem..well actually about three poems ago I read a really really good poem but that's not the point
the point is
this was lovely
and I'm happy that you wrote it
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Thank you so much Tefnut.....I greatly appreciate it. Amazing what one can conjure up when we are lost in thought.
Thank's again
~Courtney~
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