Plastic smiles
[Liar,Liar]
A mere mannequin
[Oh,you make me cringe]
Back straight,stand tall
[Just avoid that invisible wall]
Flutter those eyes
[Do it,just don't ask why]
Strike a final pose
[Life of glamour,that's how it goes]
Author notes
"guns go;;BANG!!"
Option 1
Option 1- Dirty Pretty
"Your Heart Is My Symphony"
A contest entry
- ღ5 fun options by Erinღ by erininthesky.
430 points, ended June 20, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - && I'd rather have a b r u i s e d pelvis;; than a //sha tte red\\ ♥ by PaintedParisPassion.
500 points, ended July 19, 2007, 27 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Wow...yes...catwalk models a very strange breed indeed...
Great job here and I have a question but I will mail you direct...
Simon
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A view of what others think beauty is. Shaped and force fed to us, the manipulation of body in twisted conspiracy with the manipulation of mind. Beauty seen as an outer layer not as something that comes from within. Man blind to true beauty, I love this poem.
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So very creative and powerful, these things, becoming some kind of world into some people, images, beauty, and vanity, dying for it...
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great poem sugar keep it up
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true
Why do people just conform to life. dont question anything just listen it really makes people into zombies and that's not cool -
nicely written...
i love creative feel and the passion that has goneinto this write...you are very good writer..which youmust hear all the time...well good, ithink that is good to know we have people like you in our crazy world
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alll righhht!!! you fixed it, thanks so much hun!
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ok so i really really reall like this, but there are a few rules that you didnt follow. Please fix it. Or im going to have to DQ you.
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this is true.. actually iv been thinking alot abotu that lately..
alot of people just exist, no life to be found.
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haha
<(;.; )> <-- kirbby vampire
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So true.
Staright up
Nice work*
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Lmao
extreme speed and qucikness through out this lil diddy of the poem. loved the way it worked and also loved how well yu penned the poem very well penned and a nice lil entry for the contest. haha good luck in the contest
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Niiice. I really like it. A great use of option one. Thanks for sharing and good luck in my contest! ♥ Erin
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oh this is amazing !
crude truth...
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