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Sandrine Dreams

Sense, selflessness, strength surely signed,
Assure attractive aura, achieve aim.
Nirvana never needed nicer name,
Delightful dancer daintier designed,
Resplendence rarer.  Rhythm right refined,
Inner ideals, innate insight, inflame.
Nascent Nefertiti nets neat claim -
Enlightenment eternal. Eyes enchain,
Desires discerned, divinity defined,
Resuscitate, redeeming rightful reign,
Eden’s endless enchantments, entertain
Air angelic artlessly aligned.
My miracle, myth, music, mistress, mate,
Serenity sustained shall senses sate.



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Acrostic Sonnet Sandrine Dreams
LETTERS ABSENT b j k o p q w x z

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Comments

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  • bryansgirl04
    August 6
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    very well written

    your poem is very well written i wish i could write like this

  • Loki gold member
    August 1
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    Thanks for the entry, good luck.
  • albymyheart gold member
    June 20

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    Very well done and congratulations on the gold. I have a poem written in much the same way and acrostic alliteration. Yours here is the first I have seen like mine...alby


  • Folken
    June 26, 2007
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    well, while it doesn't follow the format of a sonnet, it is very well written. thanks for entering.
    • Sonnet Format

      Many thanks in retrospect for the gold ...
      rhyme scheme abba abba abba cc appears totally conform
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