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Dark Corridors (Purgatory)

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I'm lost, I don't know this desolate place,
There's nothing familiar, I can't remember anybody's voice or face.
I'm trapped here, it's dakr and lonely,
The cobwebs are getting bigger, nobody can invisage me.

Down those passages of purgatory,
There are so many passageways that call to me so ghostly.
I have no idea where to go,
No passages hold thee warm greetings that I used to know.

I wander these corridors  of lost souls,
Pondering and wondering what misery the future may hold.
If only I could remember where it all went wrong,
I could put it all right and finally feel that I belong.

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  • Lady Nightshade
    June 13, 2007

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    This is really good anna.i got a message of a lack of identity and feeling lost in the world.Dark and beautiful. Nice one.xxx