Touch(Acrostic)

Tethered by the souls, we live
On the memories of being together
Unscathed love shimmers in the eyes
Crooning for being one again,
Hoping… for a longed touch!

June 13, 2007

-Neha

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theredcatjazzoflove
June 21, 2007

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this was
a very beautiful acrostic piece i loved it a whole lot and I am a very huge fan of acrostic writings i must say you really touched me with this one hugs

Neha Sharma
June 22, 2007
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thanks. I appreciate your views.
good wishes
-Neha

Heavenly Angel
June 16, 2007

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Quite the beautiful piece this is! Rock on!
I truly enjoyed this one! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! All the very best!

Neha Sharma
June 13, 2007
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Dear Michael,
thanks for the lovely comment. your comments are always awaited.
love
-Neha

Arsenic-
June 13, 2007

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Longing and belonging... the essense of so many poems. Great description of what happens when two spirits touch for a time.

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