It pulls you under
suffocates you
with its power
It demands you surrender
There is no choice
no turnung back
It stays within your soul
forever
A contest entry
- MY FIRST CONTEST: I WANT LOVE RIGHT NOW. PREWRITES ALLOWED...COME IN AND CHECK OUT by the-gifted.
600 points, ended September 26, 2007, 108 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - OPEN YOUR HEARTS by psychiatrists dream.
525 points, ended December 10, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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=) amazing!!!!! (=
Very thoughtful a deep I'm suprised you only checked out the one you commented on my page after reading this you seem more into other things sorry. I really like this poem I connected with it. Its very good and well writen.
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short and sweet,so very well written, thanks for entering and good luck!
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amazing
awww mom this was such an amazing write!!!!!!!
its straight forward and really true!
keep up the great work :]
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aww, short, sweet and too the point. great write. good luck in my contest.
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I love your writing style! It's amzing it's short but you get it the point across I loved this poem!
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wow, powerful dark write.. love can be a killer, and also a healer.. great write! thank you for sharing!
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True, true
Or so i've been told. This sounds like a brief but accurate summary of what it feels like to be in love. There must be a lot of love in your life for you to write such a lovely piece. Great write. Keep up the good work. -
Yes, love is a mighty powerful force and can cause one to do things they never thought the'd ever do for someone, just because they love them so much. Says it all in these few lines.
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Very true
Very well penned and a very true poem at that. I like the way it flowed and the rhythm of the poem as well. what impressed me most was how well penned this poem is and any ways this was just a very well penned down right awesome poem. keep up the good work
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nice! and might i say true
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