I am slowly going downhill again
its getting darker as i go.
No more colours just dark grey and black.
Getting upset over things i shouldn't.
Seeing somethihg live on television so shocking
to talk about.
Being told things i have not done or
and have no recolection of.
Being blamed for everything that happens
in somebody's life.
Rumors being started about me that aren't true.
Angry at someone who is an alcaholic and is
ruining his families lives without knowing
what he has done or is doing.
An acaholic who is almost 50 and was caught
drinking and driving less than a year
who hasn't learned his lesson.
I am someone who has a lot of pain in me
ready to blow up at any time.
A contest entry
- { depression/ suicide} by Angel Eyed Baby.
702 points, ended December 22, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Good
This is very good ...it pours out the emotions like thick syrup. The message is well presented and the words mean something, ....something important in the mind of the author! An outpouring of emotions that surges up from the heart and splashes against the page. This explosion of feelings is like a wave of emotion washing away the years of empty promises within her life. Like a cleansing rain the author pours out her soul and feels frustrated by the experience. This is a deep piece and it struggles with the feeling of helplessness and uncertainty. A good poem requiring some refinements with the word choices.
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Sad
for you Ms. Kitty... This is a very sad poem because I know of a little about what is going n yet I do understand it to where it has upset you in a way no one should ever see. Prayers to God to watch over you and send an Angel down upon you and your family have been answered as each and every day he watches over you. It is sad that you are going through all of this but hopefully when you do explode someday it won't be to the brink of insanity but even if you did go insane after all this built up pain I would still love you no matter what. My dearest Ms. Kitty all I can offer is to be there for you no matter what and hope things will go away soon enough 
Mr. Tiger 
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