We knew this day would come
but it still cuts through us
Your other life beckoning
So foolish to think we could
have it all
but we will always treasure
our moments,
they were our lifelines
With a final tear ofgoodbye,
It's over
In a list
A contest entry
- Have you had Distant Tears? by Whoochi.
900 points, ended June 25, 2007, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Its so hard to do...I hate remembering the happy times I would much rather remember how much of a jerk he was that makes the pain easier to deal with.......thanks for this write!
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brought back some heartache...
This brought me back to my break up with my high school sweetheart. Wherever Tracy is today, I wish her the best that life and love has to offer, because she deserves it.
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DEEPLY TOUCHING!
Sometimes it is best to walk away for the best of both involved. It is never easy but one has to stay strong and do it.
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Oh my.....gut wrenching and sad, but somehow I really like it, does that make me sick & morose??? Best of luck...ty for entering
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N. I wanna
you right now...this just breaks me up inside. I know these feeling all too well my dear Good luck in the contest 
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So sad. Very touching. Well written. Thank you for sharing and good luck.
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