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Dark Truth

Deadened Lips Kiss my wrist
as the razorblade once again slips
A few more pills make for a better trip
down and downed snorting a strip
coked out crack up
one to many times a little fuck up
one no two no one three four
Fucking high on the kitchen floor
Fly on the glass like me to this shit
its called an addict this is all there is
Kiss, Cut, Snort and Shoot
anything that you can get too
So one no two no one three fore
Lets repeat this rhyme a few times more

~CokedOutAngel~
~~RLS~~

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  • leokadia
    October 28, 2007

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    Incredible

    amazing, same sort of theme. Abuse to yourself by yourself. I love it. My favourite line being, 'deadened lips kiss my wrist.'
    Well done, you have alot of talent, on my favourites.
    ~Rach

  • pelo801
    September 1, 2007
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    a harsh reality, and my heart bleeds for you/them


  • ScrewAllOfYou
    August 31, 2007
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    It is a dark truth of an addict. They repeat this all over, ruining their lives. They do it because they believe they must, they must rid them of whatever it is thats bothering them. It's quite sad. The pain and truth of an addict, no matter what it is they're addicted to, was penned splendidly here. Excellent write.


    • BrokenAngel24
      October 6, 2007
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      Thank you so much for seeing that in this peice. I tried for it. Sorry I havent responded sooner. Thank you again when I get more time I will try and return the favor.
      -Broken Angel


  • devilspawn102
    June 12, 2007
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    WOW THAT IS A COOL POEM

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