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promises

people talk on the street
of promises someone didn't keep and
of people who had not told the truth.
as i sit here and ponder while looking at you

you tell me a tale and i know its not true
and still her you sit acting like its so real
and that this tale was ideal.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Neha Sharma silver member
    June 13, 2007

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    Nice

    wow.. this poem is wonderful. It has such a deep messege that too in a few lines. I'm glad i clicked on it. thanks for sharing.
    good wishes
    -Neha