Take my hand,
Hold it tight.
Feel my love,
Become my life.
Take my hand,
take me away,
you my love,
I trust this day.
Hold it tight,
Be my might,
give me strength,
all my life.
Feel my love,
Feel what I feel,
Know my ways,
without say.
Become my life,
Take my hand
You my love,
I trust each day.
Hold it tight,
All my life.
Feel my love,
know my weakness,
And I will not fear.
Become my life,
Become my heart,
Become my soul,
Become,
The Whisper of my soul.
Author notes
Option #5.
to my cousin and his girlfriend they'll be getting married next year and I'm happy for them.
A contest entry
- Just Another Contest You Won't Look At Or Are You Proving Me Wrong?!? by Xxthe angry gothxX.
800 points, ended July 12, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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touching
This was very sweet of them and congrat's with your cousin's marriage. This poem was simple and elegant. What I really liked about it was slightly detached, but my words aren't right. Good luck.
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thank you for the complement.
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This is such a sweet poem. Simple yet very beautiful. Great job! Wish you the best of luck in the contest.
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thank you may God bless you to.
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wow nice
this was a really cool poem and pretty well written! good luck in the contest! -
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thanks for the comment.
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wow
theyll love it. its beautiful imagery -
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thanks for the comment
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wow this was nice....the feeling is just prefect and so is the wording. great job
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thanks
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ooh I like it! I a lot! so beatuiful! keep it up!
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thank you
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