In the garden of heaven .
Peacefulness grows of all types of flowers .
I choose the rose .
It's shinning unfurls from the beauty within.
God's grace makes it bloom.
Master piece of heaven.
The smell of the rose can compare to God's grace.
Clean and pure in it's form.
Like the smile on the face of one of God's children.
who are blooming with love .
From the sunshine exploding from heaven above.
Many flowers give light to heavens bonquet .
God gave us the flowers which brought us beauty this day .
We will grow like his flowers in the heavenly grace.
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option 5
A contest entry
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300 points, ended July 29, 2007, 19 entries
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delicate and beautiful
just like the rose....very touching!
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super lovely. i love this whole concept. gives me much to look forward to. the thought of us growing as God's flowers... sighs... i just love this. good luck with the contest. definitely deserves something. ty for sharing. it made me smile inside.
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This is very beautifully written. I love every line of it. Nicely done.
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Beautiful work of art. It's very heartfelt and loving. God Bless.
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The Rose are one of my favorites for a few reasons, I liked this poem. It was up lifting, simple and sweet.
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Roses are my favorite! I get such a sense of peace when tending to them or even just inhaling their beautiful scents. A beautiful and so full of wonderful imagery very uplifting. I hope you are doing well I am sorry I have not been here for you. I have been ill, but you have always been in my thoughts and prayers. love
Theresa
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Excellent
Long time no see my dear friend.
This is a wonderfully penned piece of work.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
*S* Cynthia
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Wonderful !
Hey, you finnally got it. This is a beautiful non dark poem. I like it lots. Keep up the great work. -
Wonderful !
Hey I think you've got it ! A great upbeat poem here. Keep up the great work ! The rose is my all time favourite flower as well. -
Such an uplifting and spiritual write. Such a beautiful garden you have described. I just love this write
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Excellent !
Well I'm really impressed. You actually broke away from the depressing type of poetry you used to write.
Keep up the good work.
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a beautiful poem.
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This was nice. I like how you said that we grow like his flowes in heavenly grace. Thanks for sharing.
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