Search to reason, reason to search.
Twisted, turning, blown mind, mind blown turning twisted.
Fate sealed death to life, life to death sealed fate.
Wonder your will, will your wonder.
Stars controlling, controlling stars.
Hunger for pain, pain for hunger.
Nothing for worry, worry for nothing.
Sorrow through journey, journey through sorrow.
Being angelic, angelic being.
Please tell me what you think
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In mirror
a glass lake
of dreams
of schemes
-c
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like the form, nice language. did you create this form? if you did, definitely something you should publish on. it's brilliant. i loved the last line, 'being angelic, angelic being'
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Great form of play. Write to live, Live to write!
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nice one
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clever word play.
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Nicely written...nice play on words.
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*clapping* *bows* well penned indeed, although perhaps ended too soon, as it seems like one more line to tie it all together such as maybe changing around the relfecting start? anyhey this is a great write indeed and shows the formlessness in words and meanings that create the journeys in the mind, quite a trip,
anyhey well penned dear poet
w banana and caramel split
-jas
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the wording appears like a reflection in mirror,,,,,,,,,,,we know earth is round,,,,,so everthing started by zero,,,,,,ended into zero,,,,,so nothing is in our hands everthing is only illusion
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I love your word choice, this is beautifully written! Great work, keep writing
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good write
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Excellent! I've never seen anything like this!
Great how the meaning changes "nothing for worry [pills, therapy, self-help books]/worry for nothing"[trust that the Lord is in control, do your best, press forward], with your clever word selection!
I really like this piece! Great job!
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just was i was looking for! thank you for entering and good luck!!
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Very creative and different!, you can almost read it backwards. Great job!, good luck in the contest
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