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Night Jewel

As swift as the shadows crawling across your eyes,
As real as the fear you can't describe
The mists that gather in the night
They wrap you close and hold you tight
And in that one moment of fright,
You'll see me, a jewel of the night

A gem among theives
A fright among the means,
of making your blood run cold,
Of you soul being sold
And in that one moment of fright,
You'll see me, a jewel of the night

Crimson shades across your eyes,
A fear you can't describe
The wavering fog strengthens its hold
Ghost of others, strong and old
And in that one moment of fright,
You'll see me, a jewel of the night

Watch for the shadows, souless shades,
With deadly, dripping blades,
That haunt every city and town,
To their pits, they'll draw you down
And in that one moment of fright,
You'll see me, a jewel of the night

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  • trytothink
    June 18, 2007
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    interesting, I liked it. Keep up the good writing, and read some of my stuff if you would like to!