Even the sweetest love is rife with thorns,
their little pricks tear bitter then sweet;
Blooms open rich to life yet some do mourn;
past or present, we choose to inhale the treat.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
6/13/2007
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Amazing...
WOW this is really good... it may be short but it gets the point threw and that's better then have a long poem and no one gets it... i like this poem alot! -
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seniors
Thank you so much !! Blessings. Debby
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Short, sweet beautiful! That's a gorgeous baby you are holding in your picture, too! I love the title of your piece. Thanks for sharing!
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pickers
Thank you very much for your lovely comment. The baby is my grson. Blessings.DEbby
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wow
thats really good
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I can smell the scent within your words, they are lovely. Love, C
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Tya much ! Debby
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< Silent Wolf
Thank you very much ! Blessings. Debby -
Short, yet lovely. I really enjoy the metaphor you have employed here. A nice piece of work.
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Shadowsong
Thank you so much ~~ Blessings. d
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