I felt you earie presence. A feeling like the sixth sense. I cannot see you, but feel you within and no one ever seems to listin. I feel the mourning presense when am around you.... I've tried to shake it, but that i cannot do. Perhaps.... that old Angel of Death wishes to speak with you. Im not saying this is true its just what I feel. The presense gets stronger the shorter you have. Guilt come upon me, and I dont know why. Now, your lying in the ground facing the sky. We live to die, but whats worse? Knowing the day, hour, min,sec that the bell shall toll. No matter what. The night must fall, and the final judgement call shall be upon all. Eyes beginning to water as that man that walked on waters comes for his sons and daughters. The earth shall be struck with great thunder with lightening filling the sky and that blinded eye shall open. Your earie presense I feel just praying to god that its not for me. Praying that the raven wont knock, not yet that is.
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- Darkness, Let Me See Your Darkness by AshesFromFire.
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put what I asked for in the authors box and I will read and leave a comment!
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just plain great
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You Made Me....
think in this write. like what ever faults and wrongs I did to start acknowledging them and try to get myself right with him cause you are truthful in this write you never no when its your time -
wow I thought that was really good doesent make me feel that earie wow that was a really nice poem. I kinda understand your meaning its very clear put some poems are hahrd to figure but yours wasnt.
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Wow. I don't know which is my favorite part....It's a bit shaky but over all good.....I feel kinda spooked. Lol. Good poem though!
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this is a very extrememly eerie write for me to read. that is all i can say as i am in a bit of a state after reading this. viyanna rosemarie
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