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Beauty Revealed

Angels painted in gothic times

reveal the beauty of an era gone,

their grandeur unleashed

like a deluge of rain;

poured and set into gilded frames.

 

 

(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson

6/13/2007

 

 

 

 

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  • Melodies
    February 19

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    HOODWINK!

    Ah, a real beauty of a poem here. You write like an old poet, with classic thoughts that warm the reader's soul.


  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    February 19

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    Hoodwinked!

    I love this. Gilded frames was a great choice of words.
    I think that the most beautiful of all statues are from "gothic" inspiration.

    Shari


  • Heavenly Angel gold member
    June 16, 2007

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    Very well done; much enjoyed this write...Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest

    • Debbysmiles gold member
      June 16, 2007
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      Angel

      Thank you very much for having the contest. And, thank you for your comments. Much appreciated. Blessings . Debby


  • Ryuzaki
    June 12, 2007

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    sweet

    i liked it, its a very swwet poem. (i'm going to start going into metaphors here) it reminded me or a stream running silently through the woods, it was clear and got straight to where it wanted to go...

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