Swimming in the sea of love,
soaking it all in.
Drowning in pure bliss,
how emotions of excitement had taken over my body.
Nothing or noone has ever made me feel such as this.
For thoughts of wonder have taken over.
Why are yu so wonderful?
Why am I just now feeling this feeling?
Tangled up in you has been the best thing that has ever happened to me,
for I know you are frobidden.
I can't help it.
You are delicious.
You are what my life has been missing.
And for that I thank you.
Tell me of personal experiences
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Things we can't have always seem so much better, don't they? Like a million dollars... This poem gives a short insight, but a good one about roaming through love, and the people of it.
GREAT job
diggin it majorly
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fantastic
great feelings such love such a perfect image of love longed for.
were i the object of this poem i could only say, the only thing of meaning in my life would be that you are my love and you are my bliss and if you were to be mine we should never be missing love ever again.
this was a great write.
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thank you
i have been struggling with, dwelling in, and completly amazed with the emotions that have come over me... i fell in love and didnt know how to put it into words. you have shown this emotion so beautifuly with this write i realy enjoyed reading this. i thank you for sharing it with allpoetry.
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