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No Time

There's a place,
Somewhere that I know,
And the space,
Where we could stand and grow,
Now there is no time,
Because time is not enough,
To change the things we want,
As we move further from ourselves.

There's a dream,
Spinning in a wheel,
And seen from within,
With all the love we feel,
Now our dreams are dust,
Because now there is no time,
To change ourselves from within,
The disguises that we wear.

Now there is no time,
To change ourselves from here...

There's a time,
Somewhere long ago,
A state of mind,
Where often we would go,
But now there is no time,
Because time has just run out,
To share the things we need,
As we grow further from the truth.

Now there is no time,
To change ourselves from here...

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  • Samm.
    June 30, 2008
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    well written

    this is a great poem good luck in the contest


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    July 7, 2007
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    I really enjoyed reading this. Great form and it takes you into it. Lovely!