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Bang bang

Bang bang,
i loved him so.
bang bang,
but he told me no.
bang bang,
it made my mind go red,
bang bang,
that he loved a man instead.
bang bang,
so i shot my baby love dead.

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i'm weird aren't i?..lol..a little something i whipped up on a napkin

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  • Kiran silver member
    July 22, 2007
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    A great different poem! I liked it!!!! Thanks for your entry. All the best!


  • HoneyFire
    June 12, 2007
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    Not weird but very different. But its still a great write.

    HoneyFire!