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The Truth

Serenity Transforms,
Fear is ever present,
Within is strength,
Dig Deep,
One foot in front of the other.
Close your eyes,
Or keep them open,
Wisdom lies beneath,
Blanket Yourself in love,
Cuddle up enjoy the ride.
The mirror is ever present,
Inside and Out,
Your Beauty is Un-Denied.

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  • Peteskid gold member
    February 19, 2008

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    inner beauty , the one we get to keep and share in affection, is the key here, the wisdom and the caring... so very well done, some depth of thought here...well done...PK


  • aceray
    July 26, 2007
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    This is incredible from view point. So many different emotional angles in this piece! I don't even know where to begin to try on address them! Ha, maybe I shouldn't, I might be over doing it! But the main message here is still loneliness to a degree. I liked the way you wrote it!

    Rey


  • Exhaled Cynn
    June 12, 2007
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    Well written. Good flow. Didn't wow me. But it was enjoyable to read. Keep writing!

    Cynn