“Frustration”
So I’m
On the couch,
(Not Freud’s, you know, though it might as well be)
And I’m thrusting IN! and OUT! of myself,
Bucking and writhing while biting my lip,
Gasping and staring at the ceiling while my hips move.
I try to be quiet, but I moan-
I gasp!
P-
O
It’s building, ascending, rising, climbing to the T
-and then the doorbell rings.
Author notes
Out of all the frustrating things I've encountered in life, sexual frustration is definitely the worst.
So tell me what you think, be critical, all that good shit
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Oh yes. Darling, this is the poetry you write that I absolutely adore.
You managed to infuse it with this stacatto rhythm, the choppy phrases are just perfect. And, yes, you got beyond the confines of the static verse with your caps and (oh what did they call this in middle-school Lit?.....) P-
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Ditto the frustration. But hey...dorms this fall, I promise I won't interrupt. lol -
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lol. erm, i think the TOP thing has something to do with concrete and abstract...or something...that one thing with that one dude...
but yeah. i'll hang an hourglass on the door or something.
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is sexual frustration really the worse? Hmm maybe i need to invite some people over soon lol
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i don't know. i think it's the worst, especially when the hunger is insatiable. i think it's worse than other frustrations because i can't get it off my mind.
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ahahahaha.
I loved the ending.
lol I just can't get over it! It's fantabulous! just fuckig perrrrrrrrfect!
christ, it's so hard for girls to reach organsm and then for something like that to happen when you're about to reach it! that's like... that's just not fair!
♥
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no kidding. of course, what's even worse than that is when you are able to orgasm, even more than once, and it's still just not enough. i mean, by then your hand is totally cramping. it's just plain sucks.
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