cry and weep
dont make a peep
yell and scream
it just dont seem
all you can do
is hope that it ends soon
and you will soon be dead
because you are nolonger you
he tucks you in
kisses you good night
whispers hell be back tomorrow
for more of his wicked games
for he will return
and cause you more pain
Author notes
this poem is based on a chareter i made up who was raped most of her lyfe so ya
A contest entry
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370 points, ended July 7, 2007, 7 entries
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great write, really conveys a lot of emotion
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damn
damn thats pretty deep..miss u sis.. -
This touches the heart very nicely. Great job here.
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This is a great write and really expresses the hidden feelings which some people do have everyday. You've actually made it so i can really see it happening.
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a simple poem that describes how the character should express the pain she is going through. well done ^_^
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I love this poem! I would go get with my short story, I love you Daddy... Did you mean to stopp rhyming?
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