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stolen me

your easysmile is Rembrandt's curve
dancing across a portrait canvas
hope in you coming close is sandglass
I dream to be the lightning

you have stolen me

and if I may, if I might remain stolen for ten thousand nights
then I would rest easy, rest happy
knowing that

you could be

the voice on the other end of the thought
thinking you into me and vice versa

you sparkle


                                ever you look so
elegant and wonderful

I have been stolen, taken aback by
you and everything
about you every
                    single
                            thing

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  • GraveDigger
    December 6, 2007

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    Chad I love it! it somehow flows so well. I hope to read more by you soon. Take care and I love ya.
    Michell


  • Manicmuze
    November 8, 2007

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    This is really beautiful and very heartfelt. i enjoyed the softness and imagery.
    nicely done,
    ~ w