Passion burns
deep in my heart for you
I want to feel your warm naked body next to mine
under silken sheets of red.
I need to feel your touch
on my breast
arousing me perfectly
until I moan in ecstacy.
I need your deep kiss
with your tongue doing circles around mine
making me feel more loved
than I ever have.
I will move your head lower
to the soft part between my legs
where you will drive me crazy
until I scream in agony.
then,
you will drive your long shaft
in me and move slowly and tenderly
gradually getting faster
the room is getting steamy.
We shall then hit total ecstacy together
then I will move against your body
and whisper in your ear
"I love you honey"
Author notes
I read you rules
I gave it my best shot
hope you enjoy
A contest entry
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Comments
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this was really good.. great imagry and tone.. thanx for entering and good luck..
Laters
Loves...*hugs* -
Now I want sex. ♥
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it is very well done and wow is it out there on the sex scale hahah
thanks for entering -
this is such a good poem
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well thank you, im glad u enjoyed it!
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Well i dont know whos rules you read lol but this is a good little poem
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Very sexy write you have done here I am a big fan of erotica. Keep up the great penning
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Very passionate and very well done...this is sooo wonderfully erotic; much enjoyed
Wish you the best in the contest -
this is a great job, and very steamy and descriptive. I enjoyed reading this. Great write, and good luck in the contest.
*Please do not reply or rate my comment, in the spirit of being an anonymous contest. Thank you.
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