when I first saw your picture I didn't know what to think
with your little bikini, frills of white and pink
blond hair flowing, with leather boots, your eyebrow raised
you can't be eighteen, but your looks still amaze
I look at your picture, and thats all I can do
you gave me a friend request on my-space, and it keeps me amused
I scan with my eyes, one hand on the keyboard the other, on my breast
I leave you messages, talk dirty, I want you so bad, I try my best
that look in your eye, your picture imprinted in my mind
it's all that keeps me company, in these cold dark nights
all alone and by myself, thats when I find comfort in you
all I have is your picture, and I know that it's true
but all I want is you, I keep saying that,
but its all i can think of
the look on your face, I could get you to laugh
I think of you again and again at awkward times
but between obsession and infatuation there lies a fine line
when I'm talking to my girl your there in my mind
I wash my body in the shower and your there i find
I put in a flick and sit down to watch
and you keep my mind occupied when I put it on pause
I jump in the bathtub and put the jets on full bore
again I think of you and I just want you more
I just get so worked up and tense
all I think of is if I had your presence
you have become all I want, a fantasy of mine
more than a person, a spirit of divine
I feel so connected to you, you are my Venus
but i feel as if all the Greek gods have come between us
as I lay with my woman, I sit back and try to sleep
but your image, into my mind it creeps
but your picture just makes me so hot
I try to ignore it but I just cannot
so I kiss her mouth
run my tounge down her neck
over her heart
between her breasts
down her abbed stomach
but your image, into my mind it creeps
I get to her hip bones
and I nibble them just a bit
then down to her sweet spot
I trace the alphabet on her clit
she giggles as I pull back her lips
and I blow a stream of air
she says "be careful I'm delicate"
and I nibble her gummi bear
and I again think of you
I cant help give it to her rough
I prepare to mount and make my way to her back
and her breathing speeds up
I get her to squeal as I bite the back of her neck
and into my thoughts you creep yet again
I tingle all over as we take turns
I get an adrenaline rush
as I ejaculate and squirm
my body drenched in sweat
we move to the shower
all of it gets wet
as we play for hours
I fondle, she fondles
the lotion and the petals of flowers
my head lies on her chest
as I caress her breasts
and my thoughts drift back to you
why do you bother me like this, I do all I can do
to try to forget you
I try to get you out of my head
I would feel so much better
but all I can think of is if we were together
I am but a woman, with only you in mind
your all I can remember, all I ever will find
I want you so badly, it hurts sometimes
but all I have is your picture, but it's one of a kind
Author notes
this isnt a true story...but it is based on a true story
A contest entry
- I want erotica by Lord Merlynn.
500 points, ended June 16, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lesbian Erotica -- There Needs To Be More!!! by Sesheta.
700 points, ended September 14, 2007, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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not quite erotica, but it is a great write, and I like it. Great job here, and good luck in the contest.
In the first line, you said:
"when I fist saw your picture"
I think maybe fist should be fiRst?
Other than that, great job, and good luck, again.
*Please do not reply or rate my comment, in the spirit of being an anonymous contest. Thank you.



