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It Chimes

Bell
silver edges
gleaming, glowing, engulfing
gathering hypnotic sound waves
Chime

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Of course, a cinquain.

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  • sluha
    June 17, 2007

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    I think it is so interesting how sometimes simple things can captivate our minds so much... you know its the meaning we put into things... after the meaning then we decide to put some enjoyment into them... like this piece for instance how could chimes be so beautiful? I mean who was the person who said this is beautiful... and this is music to our ears... you know what im saying? but yeah I like how this short piece moves.... I especially like "Gathering hypnotic sound waves" I don't know its so true. huh? you have a nice short piece here congratulations

  • swanridur gold member
    June 16, 2007

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    Very beautiful and well executed.....like this very much my dear nutjob


  • jo-el
    June 13, 2007

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    the sounds while spoken resonate not totally unlike that of a chime.. i'm a big fan of alliteration so this pleased me immensely..very well done for so few words. excellent write