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I'm O.k

Curled up in a ball
No place to go
I remember the pain
It's all the same am I going insane?

Ramble, ramble
Your words go on
Like a knife cutting deep inside
I try to hide
She's consumed by pride.

Feeling like a scared child,
Yet I'm an adult
Why do I want to run?
Does she think she's having fun?
Can't wait till the day is done.

Bullied at college
By a woman who should know better
She's training to be a counsellor,
Is she going to care?
I can't see her going anywhere,
It just doesn't seem fair.

I go home
Can't get it out of my mind,
My brothers on drugs,
My finances are out of control,
Am I bearing my soul?
Will I reach my goal?

All these questions
The pain inside
My mind is working over time
Am I crossing the line?
Is this a messed up rhyme?

I'm training to be a counsellor
Yet it seems I'm in a mess
Is that O.k?
I'm going to make it anyway
I'm O.k.

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  • rvh1956
    September 27, 2007
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    Brilliant.

    What more can I say?


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 12, 2007
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    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! I wish you the very best!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    June 12, 2007
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    Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest! I wish you the very best!