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Death to the World

The Gods will scream,
The time has come
For this foolish world to end!
Fire shall rain upon the
Souls doomed to stay here for
The eternities to come.

The oceans will boil and

The carcasses will fill the air

With the stench of their rot.

The damned will choke and

Gasp for breath when

Breathing the foul air.

Their tongues will blacken

And their eyes will bleed,

As they scream and

writhe in pain.

Their skin will peel and

They'll choke on their

curdled blood.

The demons will come and

Take what is left on their

Mutilated bodies.

They'll rip skin and muscle

And they'll rip out their hearts until

The damned beg for forgiveness.

Their bones will fall and

Blacken in the fire that will

Burn for all time.

They'll lie there in

Unpeaceful rest until they

Are awakened and can breath

Again in a unhaunted world.

They wait in unpeaceful rest,

They wait in a haunted dream,

And they will wait for eternities to come.

Author notes

Yet another poem about the destruction of the world. Enjoy.

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  • Ninth-Poet
    June 24, 2007

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    A Stunning Masterpiece!

    I think mywristhurt's first two line of her comment express clearly and all too well my opinion about this piece. You have skills

    -Keep the ink flowing!
    -Good luck in the contest!
    -Sage of the east

  • SoftlyScreaming
    June 15, 2007
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    dude, you're sick.. you've got one fucked up mind, and thats fucking awesome dude.. you've definately got a way with words.. this is so cool, i wish i could write like that.. i always have to rhyme in my poems, but this didn't need it at all. you did a great job, it kind of gave me the creeps, but all in all it was cool
  • Jurikuer
    June 12, 2007
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    Cool

    In a creepy way. Glad to know how I will die, thanks for the advance. Haha.