He revealed hidden secrets, his true self-
removed makeshift mask worn
to display day and night eclipsed
where my wildest fantasies
became Dream realities.
removed makeshift mask worn
to display day and night eclipsed
where my wildest fantasies
became Dream realities.
Author notes
Req: Five lines or less...
Personal border background
made as Gift to me...
please not swipe...
Thank You....
In a list
A contest entry
- Another Five Lines or Less by Heavenly Angel.
750 points, ended June 20, 2007, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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we all wear masks
drawn to the unkown most of us are,play all sorts of parts in this grand play i am the jester i the court yard
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Wow, this is powerful!
Your talent is beyond compare.
Well written and the border
is awesome!! Nice gift!.
Good luck in the contest.
Jeannie
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Ooooo...
you just took me on a mind vacation!
For a piece with a five line restriction you really painted a vivid image.
Well done!
Love,
Amrea ♥
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Beautiful
Mother I love this peice it is beautiful and I love the picture. -Damien
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O' so very nice
you have sure painted a picture with this one...leaves me wanting more: night eclipsed where my wildest fantasies became Dream realities.O' yes! very good indeed
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WOW
Oh Hun
Excellent creation my friend...You left me wanting more...I actually looked down to see if you weren't just letting us want more...
Brilliant piece and I wish you only the best of luck in the contest
Love ya always
Tes
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Beautiful write! A dream come true!
A most fabulous five lines!
All the best with this.
Gaylene
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Another Fantastic Write
In five lines you have made someone's fantasy dreams come true for that moment from start to finish of your poem!! Probably even after your poem. So much felt and seen in this gift of response. Love this short and sweet piece! Very well done my friend, Don
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This was a beautifully penned sensual piece! Five fabulous lines
Good luck in this contest Missy ~Tia
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Interesting and precice. And, well written. Blessings. d
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Excellent
Wonderful short poem precious. Best of luck in the contest.
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Intriguing...
The line between fantasy, dreams and reality is one the is too seldom realized...but when it happens...it's magic.
This piece is really good and should do well in this contest. Well done! Good luck to you!!
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Love this write...a lot
Beautifully and wonderfully written! Thank you for sharing and for being a part of the contest!! -
Yep! You are right!! LOL. Oh yeah that is right, this is a write for a contest, LOL!! But wow!! What a grand job on this one!! I love it!! Best of luck in the contest!!!
and much love always
Nettie
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Terrific
i love it!!! it's a great piece a wonderfull poem especially for the picture below it and for the movie it represents.
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