Flickering as the fire-fly
Illuminating the darkened sky,
Vivacity of the open space
Estranged balls – a fiery grace!!
Twinkling stars I often count,
Hoping hard to flag the mount!
Owls gawk at me in daze,
Ugly creatures cast a gaze
Someday but I really think,
All the stars I’ll count and link
Now I just guess, I would still be alive,
Day my count goes, a thousand and five!!
-June 12, 2007
-Neha
In a list
A contest entry
- Celebrating 5000 Comments! by intanglio2ring.
525 points, ended June 17, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fireflys, owls & ugly creatures - Oh My!
A very clever and wonderful acrostic!
You've used the 5000 count really well in your verses especially the last!
Thanks for entering & Good Luck in my contest!
Tang
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Brilliant
neha... You're so good in acrostics... you make them look so easy... this is fabulous... keep it up
mina
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hey sweetoooo..
thanks for the comment and the applause.. aap se hi to seekha hai form poetry likhna..
love
Neha -
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Liar...
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I dont lie..
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