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You know I'm Such A Fool For You

You know I'm such a fool for you
I broke the love rule number two
I will break a couple more
If it will add to your score

My delight is your smile
For it, I'd walk a country mile
I get off on it too
And the other things you do

Pinch me, I am done
You're my ecstacy and my fun
All along you were the one
All I need and then some

Got an inkling I can't lose
If I take the chance and choose
First my head and now my heart
Now you own the whole cart

Tease me, please me, make me yours
Here's the keys to all my doors
Fill all my days and nights
With love songs and love delights

Once you said you loved me

Was that a lie?

Tell me quickly

Before I die

Who is she?  This can't be

She can't love you like I can

Do you love her more than me

Please help me to understand

You'll remember me

When the Westwind moves

All those starless nights

Our moves and grooves

 

You know I'm such a fool for you

Loving every little thing you do

Make me happy, make me glad

Tell me I'm the best you ever had!

Author notes

I will see the movie "in Bruges" in 2008 when its released.
The green-colored lines are the song titles.

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  • Morgaine
    June 18, 2007

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    Wow this is amazing! You actually worked in more than one of the choices, which is original and really great. A good poem, thank you for entering and good luck!


  • second-born
    June 13, 2007

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    such a nice romantic poem..and you know dear poet that we're such fools for your poems!!! once again, you rise up to the challenge of this contest..great job!!!


  • individuality gold member
    June 12, 2007

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    i feel like dancing now maybe i will wiggle my toe through the hole in my sock, let it dance for awhile lol a great poem/song

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