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Seperated

Seperated and devastated
Each thought of missing you
Pouring tears fill an ocean
Eternally the heart is broken
Right now I'm trying to understand
A love of a lifetime is over
That hurts deep down inside
Everything has gone wrong here
Drawing this conclusion...we're seperated

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  • Whoochi gold member
    June 13, 2007
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    wow...ty for entering...best of luck!


  • Nature Song silver member
    June 12, 2007

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    Drawing on this one conclusion, we are not together. Love from a distance...seperated in space and time! Good luck in your contest ~Sie


  • Whoochi gold member
    June 12, 2007
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    ~~TY for entering the contest~~ Good luck! Very good emotional write...