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thoughts

I. Imagine time and prison
  love is livid
  but every heart;
  vein.


II. Roaring music over paradise
    celebrate what never could.
    If rain must leave,
    let it speak brilliant murmurs.

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  • brothaluv
    October 20, 2007

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    i find it a high possibility that one day [likely after our deaths] my dear claireabelle will be a famous poet.


  • TheD
    July 1, 2007
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    Simple and Devine

    A gift indeed


  • ZestyDreams
    June 20, 2007
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    It's excellent how you have captured so much in such few lines. I wish I had that gift.