Hello [Gorgeous]
you used to be much prettier
>>what the [f][u][c][k] happened to you<<
Why can't you turn && face me baby?
I [want, need, crave] love you
more than you'll ever know
When you were [[prettier]]
You were a picture-x-perfect-x-body-x-mold
&& now ::now:: n o w
you're just >worthless<
[tragic] babe, just.so.damn [tragic]
this d i l e m a, this c a t a s t r o p h e
::All.because.of.him::
Do you t.h.i.n.k of me like I d.r.e.a.m of you?
pretty hair && [bathroom.s|t|a|l|l|s]
}Lipstick X'ed across the glass{
so I don't have to see your ::ugly face::
I'm a [[fucking]] work.of.art
But, he >>destroyed<< me
Author notes
Mirror mirror
A contest entry
- Mirror Mirror by Ignis Corpus.
500 points, ended August 1, 2007, 40 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow, this is a really sad but amazing write. It sucks when you are told you're not good enough...
anyways, great job : ]
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good poem i can realte to this piece very well. i love the dirty pretty i have tried my hand at it not sure if it is as good, but oh well. good job and best of luck in the contest
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This whole thing is amazing ♥
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Haha
That was fucking hot!
amazingness. =]
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If I could only just etch his image of out my head then maybe I'd try and be a little prettier, nothing lasts forever just like hope and dreams are just some little sick twisted lie that most people seem to foolishly believe in. Gotta agree here, well done and good luck in body-x-mold's contest as well.
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This is so sad hun.
But still an amazing piece of poetry.
You used the wordbank/quote options to your full advantage. I just love this write.
Do you t.h.i.n.k of me like I d.r.e.a.m of you?
pretty hair && [bathroom.s|t|a|l|l|s]
}Lipstick X'ed across the glass{
so I don't have to see your ::ugly face::
Love those lines. i can relate to that, a lot.
this is amazing, doll. Keep it up.
Good luck && thanks for entering
[♥]
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pretty isnt worth anything, ever
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You're right. But for the contest, it was
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You could turn this into a song, i'd listen to it.
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Haha, thanks. Thats also what my guitarist saidd!
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doesnt it seem that we all are works of art waiting to be destroyed???
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