A man wishing not leave. Hoping for something, anything, to keep them together. This man is not evil in his leaving nor is he angry. How can one be angry at the one who he loves with all his heart. No, this man is not evil, but in love. So in love that he can no longer stay. No longer stay with the one who has captured his heart. For she does not love him the same. Though she tries, and wishes she could. She often wonders why not him, why will my heart let him in. He has tried for so long and has yet to reach her heart, he feels as if though he must take his leave, for he can no longer take the pain of not having her. For this pain is far worst than leaving her. But all is not lost for his love for her will never fade. The flame of love that burns in his heart will never extinguish, never give in to the surrounding darkness. No he will never forget her, nor will he stop loving her. He will continue to fight for her. Fight for her love, fight to prove himself to her. For you see, she is the love of his life, the girl of his dreams. And although she may not see it, nor understand it, in his eyes they are destined to be, and he will not quit. Although to some it seems as though he already has. He simply walks away to take a break, and formulate a new plan. For you see he will never stop loving her, nor will he ever stop fighting for her. He is a man wishing not to leave. Hoping for something, anything, to keep them together, but for now they must part to ensure another meeting, another chance to come together. To be with one another forever, her finally in love.
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to ease your pain
A contest entry
- Have you had Distant Tears? by Whoochi.
900 points, ended June 25, 2007, 30 entries
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Very heart wrenching and I feel the pain and as of course you know, I feel it myself anyway. Sometimes it does help though to know we aren't the only ones going through such hardships, that we have someone else who knows how we are suffering.
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TY for the honest, genuine write..I feel your pain through this emotional prose...
TY for entering, best of luck!


