not a killer
though i've silenced my share of flames
i'm willing and able
but not that
it's unstable
i don't think it would be wise
i'm not a superfreak
i'm just super freak-ky-ky
but ya know rick james
aint got shit on me
i'm glad i'm a man
cause my competition's stupid
and my prize looks through lies
i'm not something worth polishing
just dust it off a time or two
i can dance on your eggshell
like jim morrison
but the fragile child's mind will break
leaves the yolk on your plate
or around your neck
pulling a burden that i'd rather carry myself
or let it pull me down
hanging till i'm dead dead dead
as the gavil bangs in succession
the hawk and the blisters giving damnation
throughout all time the yolk was a noose
too loose, my neck didn't snap
when you pulled me around
got off the ground
i beat the powder from your wig and face
i know my place now is to take all i can
and give all i take
for the sake that i not tip the balance
except through her purse
i hope she knows it's a farse
the mafia is coming
musik? no just gangs
but as the town dissapears
leaving just a rose
your prose was no more than a rook
reaching higher than the other scrapers
that blister the sky
in the night
where the fight goes on
just so we can get our money in advace notice
that was what the sign said
NOT ICE
i knew it wasn't
and that i was a man
only so that i may love a woman
Author notes
in this work, i referred to my own comment on fix me 45's poem, my stories checkmate, and shadowlands, rick james's superfreak, a poem by jim morrison, a story by DarkDayMagic, sum41's all killer no filler, and something else that i forgot
In a list
Fancy?
Comments
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cool. i saw the shadowlands references love the rose bit.. neato how you wove it all together.. hehe. NOT ICE or NOTICE ... lol. never realized those two are similiar.. he. she. cool. it is not ice.. i'm clever. sometimes. you're clever too.. more often than me. and you wrap the end up perfectly
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no man is an island and for some the knowledge that they are simple a man not a demi-god or superhero just a man with thoughts and feelings of a man...man makes mistakes and falls to rise again as a man... nice to see love a woman that is right babe 2 steps behind ... ah like that in a man a lot of thoughts crazy perhaps but leaving me much to ponder over in the dark of the night....yeah read poetry in dark places.... nicely penned.
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So your heart is not made of ice! You are a man and and know of love! lol, interesting poem indeed! WEll stated and had great flow! ~Sie
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